the world has stopped for me since you left
you were the one who shaped me this way
I grew stronger and stronger with every element that you put into me
your words were like a box full of suprises
that only i knew how to use
the rest knew how to look
but I did more
you knew lots
understood lots
researched lots
pretended lots
and faked lots
but now i see who i have lost
a person that now
I found out how important was
but no matter what happens Ms. Hancock
I still will remember you whenever
I breath
Fantastic poem. Keep up the good writing.
ReplyDeleteThe poem was nicely written. I liked how you wrote the many things that were "lots" and then the final line was "now I see who I have lost." It was a good way of playing with the sounds of words.
ReplyDeleteA moving and thoughtful poem. Marvelous!
ReplyDeletegood poem!!
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